The Secret

by Maple Tree   Feb 13, 2013


What do you do
when a secret
unveiled is so
hard to accept
that you can't
even pen its
reality?

If I reveal the name
than I have to accept it,
right now I'm not ready.

I'll make it my shadow
with grizzly fangs behind
my back, keeping it a
mystery;

while I listen to it Whisper-
"Lou is here"

I never knew him,
but I'll die the same
way he did....

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    It is sad to feel like this has came from your heart - but again, your best peices are the ones from that beautiful place.

    I could very much relate to this, in many ways as my life felt like a secret at one point, and even now years later, things are too hard to admit or write about and so I bury them away under a stone and pretend they are not there and I do not have to face them

    You done really well with this and created a very sad poem in a very small space. Well done. hugs x

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Something are scary and to admit them is difficult.
    This piece totally broke my heart and made me feel for you, keep your positivity strong, and know we all love you, and you are loved by many, we are always thinking of you

    Hugs x
    Love you millions :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Angie

    I dont like the sound of this... it scares me...

    (((HUGS YOU)))

    Love You

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    The emotions this poem holds hit me so hard.
    Love you<3