Guy who couldn't die

by Kelwin lost in thought   Feb 13, 2013


Once there was a guy
who went thru so much pain
all he could think about was death
he tried many times to kill himself
he held a gun to his head and pulled the trigger
it never went off
he jumped in front of a car
it didn't kill him
he tooked over 70 pills
they only knocked him out
he sliced his arm open
it made him pass out
he dranked poison
it made him sick
I tried hanging himself
the wire snapped
he tooked 70 pills then cut his wrist over 200 times
made him feel nothing
he tried so many times
but nothing worked

that guy was me

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    In every line I read my heart pounded louder and louder! I wanted to scream to you to stop trying because I'm afraid one of these days it will work, but I truly believe, as I'm down on my knees praying you'll live and stop trying to take away the life that makes mine worth more then you can imagine to me, because it has you! Down on my knees trying not to cry, I truly believe, that you lived for a reason, you are not meant to die, Kate is right, incredible right, God gave you this life for a reason don't throw it away, please don't! And everytime you tried to kill yourself it didn't work, you're not supposed to die, God has a plan for you, you have purpose, more then only words can disscribe, but keep living and you'll find out, believe me please you will, you are an inspiraiton when you hold on, don't let yourself die, don't let that demon consume yo, because you're better then that, please, hold on, for the fate you are meant to reach! You will change the world as you have changed mine!! WONDERFUL POEM, A PLUS PLUS, 100/100!!

  • 11 years ago

    by whoami

    I completely agree with Kate. You aren't supposed to die Kelwin. Not yet.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Maybe you can't die for a reason: you're meant to live for something that would change someone's world completely. :) You're amazing and it'd be terrible without you

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