I really like the flow in this one, it seems to be over so fast that you have to read it again, then again, then again. I love it!

The snowflakes and tears indicate sadness which is often related to winter and the weather and the bitterness etc. Worked really well, good job again.

Nice similes between snowflakes and tears. I loved it. The watcher can notice their sequential slow falling and relate that with feeling. Great poem.
N.B.: The syllable count of the 2nd line is 6 and should be 7.
Great attempt!

Incredibly beautiful and well put together ;) I like it