Comments : Starlit Evening

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    This is really amazing Saffie:)
    I love your use of words, great job!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    I wonder why you didn't make it belong to the love category!! I loved the idea of cotton voice, amazing!! My favorite part is:

    "The sky has never felt so close
    as you reach up to the moon
    and lay it above my head."

    The title is superior and enchanting.
    Saffie, You are always amazing and I humbly confess that you have a very well known experience which is obvious through every line you penned.
    Thank you for sharing that with us.