Comments : Disappointed Purpose of Marriage [Tanka]

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Sad but true. I love that your poems are simple yet so powerful. Very nice!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    May be this is true I think.
    Nice poem..

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    If I go with the content of the poem, yeah that's a disappointing purpose for marriage.

    However, that's not the purpose of marriage in my opinion. it should be because they love each other and they want to either their love be bless by God or they want their children to be acknowledged in society not as bastards but as children that were born in a marriage. So purpose of marriage is thinking about having a family and being together in my opinion not because of curiosity or because they are fatigue.

    But you covered a good point, I guess that's why there are more and more divorces.

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Lmao this poem made me laugh since you have it reversed in my parents case lol i really do agree with the poem tho... gotta say this poem made me laugh even though i know it's not supposed to make me laugh... 5/5

    love it Khalid

    Queen Ashlin