I know you've been strong and I know you still have the strength in you to keep fighting for this. Live for the ones who never had a life to live.

Very desperate poem of searching for a better way and for some hope and peace in life. The depression is strong in the words and shows what a dark place you are in right now.

I felt like this is straight to the point, without much imagery. But straight to the point is a good thing, it's like you put your feelings into very direct words. Good poem.

Beautiful poem stright to the point Kelwin but death is not the answer to pain i should know love i have often thought of death but now i'm better for i have my daughters and they make me whole again

Queen Ashlin

This is really beautiful and touching

You are one of the strongest people I know, you stand so strong even when I fall, thank you Kelwin for everything you have ever done for me and that is why I say DON'T KILL YOURSELF! You wrote another amazing poem here, get some of them published so you can help the whole world, like you have helped us!!

Once Lord Buddha was passing through a forest with his disciples. Then they passed by a river. After sometime, Buddha felt thirsty and asked his disciple Ananda to fetch water from the river which they had passed. But when Ananda went there he saw that the shallow water was very dirty as a bullock-cart had passed across that river. He tried to clear the water but the water became even more dirty. So he returned without water. Then after walking a short distance Buddha again sent him to fetch water. But this time too Ananda returned without water. Then after covering a short distance Buddha sent him again. This time(3rd time) Ananda sat near the river and waited. After sometime the water became clear. He brought some water and gave it to Buddha and touched His feet. He understood what Buddha wanted to teach him. He understood that things become normal as the time passes. Sometimes our all decisions and efforts make things even worse. So we should wait. Do remember a line, "THIS TOO WILL PASS"

This poem so much reflects how I feel myself...thanks for sharing!

I think dat way all the time.... beautiful

I know exactly what you mean. Very sad poem, but very well written.

I think the people who go through tons of evil stuff and live to survive are the real heroes. It takes a lot to put on a smile every day and whisper lies in the form of "I'm fine." I know it's hard, I know that sometimes the world seems so ugly and mean that you want to end it to go to a better place. But, I also know there is good in the world worth finding. Good in the world worth giving. And sometimes the most tortured souls are the ones who have the most good to give. So keep fighting hero. One day you will find the beauty and peace you are looking for. But I can promise you this. There is nothing beautiful about suicide.