by BlueJay
I like this, especially for the fact it can be taken in many ways. Its simple but nice. Great job |
by L
I love this one, it's fun to read plus has a good imagery and according to how I interpret it, it's like the meteorite fell for the asteroid, and the shooting stars is what the meteorite is seeing. |
This is really neat, I enjoyed this myself and felt I was watching this happen one night... wondering if there was a reason or if the asteroid and meteor were somehow connected. Just thinking of a shooting star makes me want to make a good wish! Very simple but thoughtful haiku nonetheless. |