I really liked that last line, realizing pain needs to be felt, I mean we think of pain as our suffering, it really brings us down....but if we make it through that, we can make it through anything. I like your descriptions of love, it's very simple and I can relate with the "trusting easily" because it's sometimes automatic to do that with certain people, we love them so much it can turn out for the worse because of how attached we've become. Only suggestion "acheing" should be "aching" and work on not ending every line with a period, maybe you could have stanza's or if you wanted this piece to all be one add some comma's and capitalize after a period? Welcome to M&M too :]