Comments : Last words

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    This poem is soo sad and filled with emotions i what to cry at reading this poem it's just wow!!!

    Each day you're just losing my trust
    By doing what you're doing and holding me back
    Sooner or later I'll relationship will be full of rust

    that is just my favorite part in this poem

    • 11 years ago

      by Trouble Child

      Thank you!! I'm full of emotions so my poems might be emotional for the next couple of poems

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Will look foward to it just email me!

  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba Hashmi

    It's amazing especially at the end when u mentioned that it's ur mother you're addressing to ...very well composed