Artificiality

This is actually quite sad. They always say copying is the biggest flattery or however that dumb saying goes, but I disagree. So many people try to be unique, but they don't realize they're just trying to be like someone else.

"too chocked up"

chocked = choked?

I love the bit about a traitor who rebels against themselves. You always find ways to put things just so interesting!

): This is heartbreaking, mainly because of the thought that it happens all the time to people.

I know I've had my share of this "friends", most of which got close enough to do a lot of damage before I realized that I was in this situation or being used. I feel your pain.

On a brighter note, I've found that these people are the people that make us who we are. They make us better, stronger people and give us wisdom in some ways. I am sorry that someone hurt you, though it made for a very well written poem. I also like the form.

Once again, The Queen nails it.