Comments : Framed

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Tears are beautiful when the soul
    climbs out of shadows, allowing
    the sun to dry away stains from
    pale cheeks; turning them to a
    bright, beautiful rosy smile.

    ^^This must be the most inspiring stanza I've read today :)

    You make me smile with your outlook, but also I feel strength from you when I know you have demons in you.

    You are a precious friend and an amazing writer...I love this piece.

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    OMG this is amazing!!!!
    Let me tell you, this shows how strong you are..
    And I agree this is so inspirational:)
    Love you<3

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This is beautiful! Just the thing to read, when you're having a good day or a bad one. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Framing the darkness upon
    my wall shall remind me
    of the moment when I was
    alone, the only person who
    could help me, was me.

    ^^ I really fell in love with this stanza, everyone should be able to relate somehow. We've all been through something, big or small, where we were our own help. Where we felt alone but knew no one could help us but ourselves....

    Very beautiful poem, honestly...and that last stanza...jaw dropping.