Material Men

by E Dacaf   Feb 18, 2013


You gawk upon the metal man,
you praise his shape and to his frame you hold.
But little do you know he is shit,
Not worth his weight in gold.

Beware the marble man,
tall and proud he stands.
But he is also flawed,
Your will he'll crack in his hands.

When next you see the wooden man,
turn and walk away.
He is stubborn,
and like that he'll always stay.

Find a man whos breathing,
who needs oxygen to live.
He is the very best of men,
Cause that breath he'd freely give.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Gabriel

    Ha! Ha! This is hilarious, especially the first 4 lines. Some freaks these days are trying to make female robots to satisfy men which I find to be disgusting, they might as well just grab a stuffed animal if they are going to consider that.

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    This is great :)

    A breath of life, of humanity is what you want
    Not a statue unable to change.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Nice rhyme and message E.