For some reason I feel that there is so much within these lines yet it has been restricted so as to not go overboard with the writer's true feelings. There is passion burning yet it is contained...Just a feeling... :)

All in all I liked it and am glad that you have started writing again..take care.

This is beautiful but...

I am not crazy about the way the stanzas are broken.. it throws the middle stanzas rhyme pattern off. If this was my poem I would get rid of those 2 line stanzas and make them all four so your rhyme is back on track.

I did not realize it was an Acrostic..oops. My bad, this adds a lot of beauty to this piece :)
It looks really good up there. Helps with the capital letters standing out. Awesome.