That Redneck

by H. Elizabeth   Feb 19, 2013


That redneck.
The one with that sweet smile.
The one with those brown eyes.
The one with the brown curly hair.
That redneck.
The one with that all too deceiving smile.
The one with those evil, lying eyes.
The one with the moppy mess of hair.
That redneck.
The one I loved so dearly.
The one I gave my everything to.
The one I always believed.
That redneck.
The one I hate so much.
The one I gave myself away to.
The one I always doubted.
That redneck.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is an darkening piece. It starts out light.

    The one with that sweet smile.
    The one with those brown eyes.
    The one with the brown curly hair.

    ^The first impression.

    The one with that all too deceiving smile.
    The one with those evil, lying eyes.
    The one with the moppy mess of hair.

    ^when you got to know him.

    I like this. It's heartbreaking, but I love it.

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