by Tara Kay
I love this, and I know this was hard to write, but it shows you're strength and that is one thing I admire about you, though you know there are many, another is you're beautiful pen and the way you transcend your thoughts into your writes, always always draws a gasp from me, a breath of beauty. |
by Wild flower
AAAAAAAAAAAAAH Now I want to scream :'') |
by Chelsey
Oh my the metaphors are beautiful here, hence the perfect topic! This is so pretty, really crafted into comparisons that make it easy to understand. I love this! |
Oh Andrea I adored this!!!! You know the first thing I saw when I clicked on this poem was "crooned". I absolutely love that word, it is so much more passionate to me than saying 'she sang'. I really felt your words. words Like I'm just waking up, having doubts about what's to come, but feeling and seeing these colors of hope come alive before my eyes. Loved the constant metaphors and this line made me smile "I will be able to consume the darkness of tomorrow with a smile". What inspiration, thanks for sharing such a sweet and strengthening piece. |