Comments : Fear [Double Senryus]

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Wow love the imagery sweetie good write! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Yup, fear can keeps us in a pit until is gone.
    But it's hard to take courage and strength to climb.
    It's hard but not impossible though. Good write.
    I like the way you did this senyru. It looks like a pivot style. I mean only the last one. Which is the one I liked the most though the bottom one has an extra syllable, but I like how is written.