Loved this poem. I felt you wanting and needing to leave but you can't. Her shackles forever, bleeding you. Shackles and blood that she is oblivious to. Good poem. ;)

I love the comparisons of each piece during the poem it shows the effect very beautiful and i really do love the poem! :)5/5

Queen Ashlin

'As my life tries to begin
Anew and unscathed by such heavy chains'

I love how you have worded the end and you deserve someone who will love you back