Exuberant and serene... I loved the vivid imagery you gave here. And as usual, you shine with brilliance.
Keep penning:)

I really like the imagery and way it just flowed in this poem! :) it shows how it gets to that that the souls has to pass some steps to reach the goal of grace... i really like this poem! :) 5/5

Queen Ashlin

I'm not a big fan of the format of this piece. Aside from how it's constructed, I am an absolute fan for the wording, and your work in general. It expressed what I can't bring to words. The wonders of our Savior and where he resides are so hard to verbalize, and you do it wonderfully.

The faithful with grace will rise above
bleeding with joy which is sorrow sublime

^^That was absolutely beautiful. The metaphor of bleeding, with joy pouring out was absolutely brilliant!

I felt some rhymes were force but what I liked about this piece is that I imagine someone praying, getting on their knees to pray and that's how I though the last line "heaven and earth will be eternally one," connected/ made sense. By praying one can feel serene, it makes us feel more connected spiritually with ourselves as to God.

But while I see this piece spiritual and can semi understand why heaven and earth will be one... I can't see heaven and earth as being one any day...

Edit: please disregard my message as feeling some rhymes as force, I just re read it more calmly and it was the way I was reading it.

I love the feeling of unity here...having our heart, mind, and soul be in tune with God and open to his love. A very graceful and calming piece, I enjoyed when you related the fresh rain and the season of spring - it made me feel renewed. Encouraging write (as most of yours are!) and spiritually touching when thinking about heaven and what journey lays ahead. Take care!

To keep things simple and sweet: WOW! :)

Excellent and beautiful I can't add more to what others have said.