Now Maryanne, I really felt this piece, and the image of this woman in the shower, the steam, the redness of her skin, its so powerful, really sombre scenery but a deep piece of poetry surrounding it.

Maybe she's trying to cleanse her
soul, nurturing her words like thrown
aside seeds that her body will be a temple
instead of a hoarding place for secrets

^^I loved this stanza, I've often stood in the shower trying to erase a part of me, trying to clean myself and burn away who I am...

I really felt this piece, good job
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