The Beauty of Who You Are

by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet   Feb 22, 2013


Hair blacker than the darkest night,
Dancing to the song of the wind,
Eyes that can see the future,
Showing you when our life will begin,
Skin of Athena,
And beauty rivals Helen of Troy,
Your touch healing,
Never used to destroy,
Love stronger than Samson,
Lifts us higher because of you,
Thank you for always being there,
P.s. I love you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon

    So lovely! I'm whoever she is adored this :). You carve an image out of words of a very beautiful, innocent girl and it's clear that you care a lot about her from this poem! :)

    • 11 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Thank you Lemon. I do care about her dearly. thank you for you kind words. i try to paint a picture the best i can in my poems and sometimes i succeed in doing that. thank you :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww, this is such a sweet poem, it is very nicely worded with the metaphors and imagery for description and makes the love very unique and not so much cliche.

    Well done.

    • 11 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      ;) thank you. I like the metaphors I try to use in poems, especially when I try to describe the beauty of a woman. Thank you for the love

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh this is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    love the concept of comparing her to Sampson and Athena... and the ending adds a romantic and elegant touch, Chris this is wonderful!

    • 11 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Blushes go around like candy to trick or treaters. Thank you Andrea. I really love this woman a lot. Just trying to show her some love ;)

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