Comments : The Beauty of Who You Are

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh this is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    love the concept of comparing her to Sampson and Athena... and the ending adds a romantic and elegant touch, Chris this is wonderful!

    • 11 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Blushes go around like candy to trick or treaters. Thank you Andrea. I really love this woman a lot. Just trying to show her some love ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww, this is such a sweet poem, it is very nicely worded with the metaphors and imagery for description and makes the love very unique and not so much cliche.

    Well done.

    • 11 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      ;) thank you. I like the metaphors I try to use in poems, especially when I try to describe the beauty of a woman. Thank you for the love

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon

    So lovely! I'm whoever she is adored this :). You carve an image out of words of a very beautiful, innocent girl and it's clear that you care a lot about her from this poem! :)

    • 11 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Thank you Lemon. I do care about her dearly. thank you for you kind words. i try to paint a picture the best i can in my poems and sometimes i succeed in doing that. thank you :)