by Tara Kay
Cute poem Jason, something all children would enjoy, it has rhythm and good flow as well. |
by BlueJay
Nice write. Simple and easy to read but very well done. Massively agree about the good use of the title |
by Baby Rainbow
I think we should all try to do more funny little rhymes because they are so uplifting to read and create smiles. I like how you stuck to a few short words per line which made the flow really quick and the rhyme stand out really strongly. |
Really enjoyed this poem Jason! And have missed you at the weekend challenges! What have you been up to? |
by Jason Rainey
I've been working 6 days a week, 12 hours a day. Then golfing on Sunday. I've been exhausted pretty much. |