Comments : Eyes of Glue

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Cute poem Jason, something all children would enjoy, it has rhythm and good flow as well.
    Great use of the title :)

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Nice write. Simple and easy to read but very well done. Massively agree about the good use of the title

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I think we should all try to do more funny little rhymes because they are so uplifting to read and create smiles. I like how you stuck to a few short words per line which made the flow really quick and the rhyme stand out really strongly.

    Would never have thought someone would create this from the title given. Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Really enjoyed this poem Jason! And have missed you at the weekend challenges! What have you been up to?

    • 11 years ago

      by Jason Rainey

      I've been working 6 days a week, 12 hours a day. Then golfing on Sunday. I've been exhausted pretty much.