Comments : Last Rays

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I love it. Definitely intense and sad. Nice job :) and the titles of your pieces are captivating. Love how you use them :)

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Bby daughter you're almost killing me inside you know how much i freaking worry darling... good poem tho...it shows the emotions in there! 5/5 and the images i see from the poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Austin

    Wonderful poem