Embers

by Jenni Marie   Feb 23, 2013


Blazing embers are past, dwindling;
leaving only ashes in its wake
cooling, dying, yet not before

it burned.

Floundering, on the rocks whereas
it once was filled with passion
creating a whirlwind of
tangible emotion leaving them
breathless.

Pouring lighter fuel on the
already destructive blaze
watching it burn, consume
until

there was nothing left.

Now,
aloofness circled the room
preying on weakened hearts
like vultures ready to
fight over and peck
at the remaining nibbles

animal magnetism that originally
worked well together now hungers
and bites, feeding from the
chaos created, delirious from
poison willingly consumed

flower blooming, tenderly
searching for the sunlight and
a way to quench its thirst only
to find a heatwave in full force

all the while, fire burned and
consumed, until

there was nothing left.

Line used: "aloofness circled the room preying on weakened hearts like vultures"

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1169466

*Written for Colm's contest*

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  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    I must say i gave a cursory reading and in so doing i think caught your deeper intent than what the content of the poem might suggest.that is...what i see is an inspired PERSON who happened to write a poem.your cup ran over and spilled out words.a lovely accident that genuinely gives me pleasure

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I read it during the contest and was impressed. I am not going to do an in depth analysis, just wanted to say that you did a wonderful job with the metaphor and your words are real sounding, not fabricated, your words are believable. The reader is presented with images and emotions that (forgive the repeat) are real. Very well done.

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