by Saerelune
Quite honestly, I found myself falling in love over and over again with the first stanza. It read so smoothly and I've always been a fan of word play. I also liked how you described both sides of romance, both birth and death. |
Hey girl :) thank you for your comment which is really useful as the rest you have provided me in the past. I did heed your advice and made some adjustments to my second stanza. Thank you!! I appreciate it!!! |