To be art

by Saerelune   Feb 24, 2013


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naughty, and nervous
creeping against the naked
curve of a soul

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Written for Colm's 7-day contest: Day 7.

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  • 11 years ago

    by abracadabra

    Exactly.

    Your succinct and 'directly abstract' poetry is pure class.

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    Um, yes please?

    This is flippin' amazing. It's no wonder you guys won, spitting out little breezes of beauty like this.

    This can be related and molded into so many different things. I instantly thought of a man painting the picture of a naked woman - naught, nervous, naked, curves.. but instead of being in a weird, creepy way, it was beautiful.. art. This is gorgeous.

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Oh wow short but very beautiful! :) i can't seem to find the words to describe this poem!!! but i do understand the poem it's like poetry it is "naughty,and nervous" at times for we make it of ourselves! :) good job girl! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Short but powerful. It's a great piece of work. Creative wording indeed

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now I love this!!

    art is explosive, such as sensuality... I adore small poems with many angles... I visualised body painting, silhouttes in the dark.. flesh to canvas... the angles of painting such as the message itself.... sighs.... I truly admire this piece...

    "curve of a soul" <--------- you brought a new life to soul... that part of self and the ability to branch out in a beautiful way....

    Oh I really love this piece!

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