Now I love this!!

art is explosive, such as sensuality... I adore small poems with many angles... I visualised body painting, silhouttes in the dark.. flesh to canvas... the angles of painting such as the message itself.... sighs.... I truly admire this piece...

"curve of a soul" <--------- you brought a new life to soul... that part of self and the ability to branch out in a beautiful way....

Oh I really love this piece!

Short but powerful. It's a great piece of work. Creative wording indeed

Oh wow short but very beautiful! :) i can't seem to find the words to describe this poem!!! but i do understand the poem it's like poetry it is "naughty,and nervous" at times for we make it of ourselves! :) good job girl! :) 5/5

Queen Ashlin

Um, yes please?

This is flippin' amazing. It's no wonder you guys won, spitting out little breezes of beauty like this.

This can be related and molded into so many different things. I instantly thought of a man painting the picture of a naked woman - naught, nervous, naked, curves.. but instead of being in a weird, creepy way, it was beautiful.. art. This is gorgeous.

Exactly.

Your succinct and 'directly abstract' poetry is pure class.