Comments : Savoured Dance...(Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Lovely!! I can see the speckled frog sitting while the dragonflies dance around.. it paints a scene in my mind of a tranquil pond... with lilly pads spinning on the water... what a lovely haiku Natasha! Oh I love this!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I pondered on this for a while, I liked the idea of the frog patiently waiting but wondered why the sad tone at the end, the last dance? Then I realised these dragonflies were about to become dinner lol?

    Nice job, you are better at forms than what you think you are xx