I'm glad you put the footnote of coiled as 1, because to me it's 2 and it threw me off until I paced it the way you intended lol.

I love your Nonet. I hate writing them, they're difficult for me because the closing just, isn't easy.. but you aced it. I thought it had a dramatic but seriously thoughtful ending.

I also liked the use of twirl and soon after whirlwind.. they internal rhyme was fun to mirror back. I like little things like that ;)