Comments : Be Optimistic of What's Hidden [Tanka]

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Lol sooo true and this poem applies to EVERYTHING in life trust me love,hate,relationships,history...etc lol i really do love it it shows that life sucks but at times there is one little bit that makes it worthwhile to have gone through that painful past... kinda reminds me of my latest poem Khalid i won't lie lol since that's what i did sort of:) good job though Khalid!!!! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Within darkness there is light! Love the message here Khalid!! very positive!!