Rustling Hedges

by Baby Rainbow   Feb 25, 2013


Deep in the darkness of abandoned woods,

I hear a voice softly whispering my name.

I feel a cold breeze tickle my neck,

making each hair stand on its end.

I see red eyes peeking sharply through

rustling hedges in the distance.

I taste fear on my tongue and lose my breath

as I decide to run for my life.

Saffie
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  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    This is great, real sense of fear in this,
    funny how a simple thing such as red eyes can conjure this.
    You describe the whole feeling of dread very well.