I like your poem. Your poem brought a wisp of freshness in my heart. Wish to read more compact with imageries and sound.

This is a very beautiful poem saffie. I love the wonders of childhood as it makes you feel alive. The child's laughter make it feel so young and free. It's the innocence here that can make you think. I think children are very free and that's the beauty because nothing scares them much. You say they run around here in the park so it makes me imagine a whole group of friends who have been close for a while. Children can vary in age but I can still see this. Their face full of joy. I like the simplicity of this line because it says so much. I like the simple things children love. Innocent minds is the right wording for sure. Freedom is very strong and amazing. That is why sometimes I am envious of child. They don't life with the pain of life. This is a very good poem though saffie. The simplicity of the lines say so much but connect so very much.