Spring (an acrostic)

by Baby Rainbow   Feb 25, 2013


Sun beaming atop the snow covered hill
Peering through clear glass windows and
Resulting in a glow of warmth.
Ingiting the forests with their colour again as
New flowers bloom and leaves begin to return
Growing in the nurture of their spring.

Saffie
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Round 7 - 7 day contest
Lap 1 - prompt 6 - spring

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  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This brings a lover of spring so much hope for the upcoming season here if it was coming lol. But I love how yiu used winter at first because you did the end of it and the start of spring. The imagery and wording are so spot on here. I love the sun peeking out behind the hills like it is just waking up and wants the world to shine. The sunshine does bring warmth to each morning it shines. Its like a friend you wake up next to. I love how you said forests and colours. They work well together. It really is beautiful when the colours come alive it brings more life the a dull world. Flowers are a simple but great touch. They add beauty to a world. The spring you describe is rich with detail. The flow of this acroustic is great and the lines connect with what you wanted to say. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this Saffie!!! Spring is such a time when the white and paleness of winter descends and new life is brought to the surface, the blooming of flowers and the beauty is just so tender in this piece...lovely little acrostic, that made me smile :)