Very nice work. I can feel the emotion and pain in your words. Hope everything works out for the best!

Beautiful poem... I can feel the pain and sadness behind your words. Great job.

Very nice. our an amazing poet. However, the way the poem was written, it seemed unatural, forced even. But it may have been intentional, as in to amplify the meaning behind your poem. Keep it up.
Aken Sol

woah.....amazing! its sad to see someone with such good talent so sad! i hope everything gets better! much love
lexi lou

I know how it feels to want to know how someone else is feeling, its sooo hard, keep your head up girl, the poem was very nice...LiL One