Some Day

by Something Diabolical   Feb 26, 2013


One day we'll look back and see
Whatever we become, whatever we'll be
Time simply passes us by
I hope it's you who I spend my life

I want to grow old with you I adore
Treasuring moments we've shared before
For years I'd been yearning, waiting for you
From the beginning you hadn't a clue

Now we're together, my glorious saviour
Keeping me safe, protecting from danger
Though why can't you see that I also help too?
You will soon see that it's I who saved you

I live inside you ready to be free
Whatever we become, you'll be part of me
We'll torture and maim everyone we can
Forever my love, we'll destroy this land

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A nice poem. Well written.

  • 10 years ago

    by Dragon Boy

    Wow! loved this one!
    you were able to put in so many different kinds of feelings in to your work.

    The rhyming was well done also, the flow was good!
    i don't see any wrong in it. good work

  • 10 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Once again you express your feelings well . I think a lot of people feel the same way. Wishing so bad to be with someone . I really like the first paragraph . It creates a cute image :)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I think this poem needs a bit of tweaking just to make it sound smoother, but overall I found the content sweet and I have missed reading poems like this one.

    Thanks for sharing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Wonderfully penned!

    I love the rhyme here. Nicely done! Also the loyalty you depict is beautiful and lovely.

    Keep penning:)

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