by Kate
I love the image of the woods. The trees mocking and the birds crying. It's sets a good stable source for the folk tale about Hansel and Gretel. No breadcrumbs. |
Wow, this really pounded my heart a fantastic amount, fantastic poem, I really loved it!!! |
by Kate
Oh I also like how you compare your fear to a beast. :) |
by StupidMe
I loved every bit of this poem. I just love poetry that creates a mere image in your head and thats exactly what yours did (: It all flowed together so nicely and all balanced out well. Excellent write. <3 5/5 |
Thank you so much! :) |
Running from fear clearly describes how cloying fear can be, how seemingly inescapable, and it shows what can happen if one actually gives up. This is good writing, and I feel I will have to read it again and again, not for fear itself, but to wonder at the near immensity of this poor wretched creation of the evil one. |
by Marvellous
Running from our fear, boosts the yoke. Knowing the Truth, is living free. |
by xXx Eternal PainxXx
For I am destined to walk alone, intertwined with their flavorless lies. |