The Invisible Space King

by yogi73   Feb 26, 2013


The Invisible Space King
watches over me
The Invisible Space King
watches over you
Hiding as I may
Hiding as I might
I am not convinced
the Space King is concerned with
wrong or right.
Bad happens to bad
Bad happens the same
It was explained to me that sun shines
on both good and evil equally
in our silly little game
Tra-la-la we go about our didn't
Tra-la-la we go about our did
Tell me that I have done wrong
and I will tell you the same

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  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This is so cute!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert

    Bwahahaha i thought this was kinda funny. Sorry if it wasnt meant that way. I enjoyed the read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You know this can be used for children like a nursery rhyme and at the same time pass on a message on how one should live. I like the flow and the subtle message it holds. I also like how you referred to God as the invisible Space King otherwise it will become like a prayer, if that makes sense to you...nice write :)

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