A free spirit

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Feb 26, 2013


The sun could not out shine
how much your smile brings
Warmth to our hearts.

Imagine being at a crossroad,
you are the sign that guides us
though the darkness into magical
beams.

Forever you are apart of each and
everyone of us,you have imprinted
on my heart.With out thorns you
Have bloomed into love of
Thousands,

a rose,
an inspiration,
a mother,
a free spirit.

For moma P

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  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon

    Such a lovely write, clear feelings behind this and you capture the true beauty and strength in an elegant way. This poem is clearly very heartfelt, whoever it was written for must have adored it :)

  • 11 years ago

    by kitten

    Its pretty. Thoughtful and written so lovingly. Whoever it is about truly is a beautiful muse. So smooth so simple so perfect.

    5.5

    With love,
    Lovenut

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Precious write. Simple as that.

    I'm positive she adored it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Your mother will love this dedication..........only joking I know it's not for your mother, couldn't resist it.
    A simplistic poem that is stripped back to just a heartfelt message, no pretence, no confusing analogies just plain and simple gratitude to a person you obviously have a lot of respect for.
    great write Tony

  • 11 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! Such a beautiful dedication to your mother... I'm sure she will love this poem!

    I loved everything about this poem... so beautiful and touching.

    I just noticed in this stanza:

    "though the darkness into magical
    beams."

    ^^ I think you meant 'through' here?

    This poem is simple yet so beautiful! <3 Great job!

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