Comments : It's late.

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    This is awesome! I can totally relate to this, it describes my weekends and well, okay like every night. :p

  • 11 years ago

    by Liz

    The life of a gamer. xD love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Eyes are dry, my palms are sweaty
    My clicking finger tired, but steady
    Food or sleep would be really ideal
    To curb the exhaustion I'm starting to feel
    But if I run just one dungeon more
    I might hit level seventy-four.

    ^^ ha, I can totally understand that feeling where due to a game we are hypnotize to not eat or to not get sleep until we achieve a new level and the cycle continues until our mind finally detaches from the game.

    oh and deal and feel are consonant rhymes, right? they end in the same consonant.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Relatable! New level means more addiction.
    Awesome
    Keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hahah, I honestly didn't see where this was going but I love how it captures the subtle signs of addiction yet in a poetic way. Nice read. (: