Comments : Winter Wonderland (Chained Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Winter wonderland
    curling beneath crisp dark soil
    Spring's turn to flourish

    ^ love this part it makes me want to love winter more since spring is around the conor lol :)

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Very cute and peaceful poem.
    the softness of your words really nice.
    I think one small correction in this word
    ^^fluffy instead of fluuffy..

  • 11 years ago

    by Athanael

    This is a really well written poem, capable of peacefully stimulating our senses, especially sight and hearing, that little by little, as each of these images are presented through the newer stanzas, are welcoming the upcoming spring, getting closer and closer as you keep reading .... and it's also interesting to see that the poem's conclusion is somehow connected to the start .... the delicate flowers of the first verse, are what perhaps represents spring the most (last verse). 5 stars.