Wow i'm blown away i can't seem to get off the first stanza it's just soo good in the images that are stuck in my head...wow!

Queen Ashlin

Pitch black clouds cover
red stained sky;

^^I like this artistic background you have painted with words! I can just see it so clearly.

while the heavens
will weep blood tonight.

^^This one stood out for me. We are so used to seeing a sunny morning, a tranquil evening but to see heaven "weeping blood" is an interesting interpretation of what is to follow.

Howling wind echoes
earth shudders distastefully
nature cries alone.

^^A heart rendering image here for any nature lover to see her cry alone while the wind whips her..I like this part!

Torrents splashing down
splatters upon turbid ground
weeping; broken earth.

^^Reading this part created an image of a woman been battered and beaten and finally sitting in a corner, broken and crying. That is what is happening to nature right now, for man is destroying her.

Overall, a heart capturing nature write. Loved the read :)