by Decayed
This was so melodious... I adore from you the writes where you don't just write half sentences (fragments).. but whole sentences.. it always feels great, I think u should stick to this! |
by Tara Kay
This was a beautiful write Andrea, I loved the melody and the tone...and of course you always manage to draw me into the scene...totally beautiful x |
by Britt
This is such a sad poem, and reading it now for the third or fourth time it breaks my heart all over again. The ending pulls at my emotions so desperately. My absolute favorite part is the first few opening lines, trapping thoughts in a jar of dragonflies. Dragonflies can look scary, especially to kids, but once you know more about them they really aren't.. except for their little bite. I thought this was perfectly placed and made so much sense. I really adore this piece from you! |
This was a really unique poem I loved how you |
by Baby Rainbow
We have consumed, |
by Angie
After Saffie's comment there's really not much more I can say, this is filled with emotion, yet so beautiful, I always adore your nature pieces and how you incorporate your life within them, guess that's what comes from being such a nature baby... your word choices in this one are amazing, I love this piece. |
Very Nicely Done!!! |