I loved the way the poem just flowed and the words used to show a picture in the minds!!!

I have always been the one
but you are no longer around.
Please:
Stay.
^^^
that part was my favorite since my heart seemed to break apart just reading this poem!! 5/5

Queen Ashlin

Wow, I LOVE THIS POEM, GREAT JOB, SO HEARTFELT AND TALENTED

I loved loved loved how you mentioned Tokyo here! I've done that a few times in my writing and it just adds to the piece giving a city like that, especially reminiscent of a volcano. There is such a confident air in the beginning, that you have already gone through the trials of figuring out you are the one for him, you are that perfect mixture that will set love on fire....the end was heartbreaking and a bit of a twist. You put it so simply, just those two words of "please:" & "stay" speak so much about that hope you still cling to that you will remain is and will be given that potential to be his, since you've known all along.