by Hellon
This is a very unusual style of writing you have here..It's very olde worlde..not like Shakespeare...something or someone else that is in the back of my mind that I can't quite place...you have me guessing now...won't sleep a wink until I remember haha!!! |
Thanks I really liked writing it, oh and when you do recall who that mystery writer was please let me know too because I'd hate to be mangling someone else's style. Thanks again for your response |
by Darren
I like the fact this is written in an old style, The layout is interesting and the rhyming scheme and tone build a good tension. It almost reads like a Shakespearean monologue, I could picture Hamlet or Macbeth uttering this on stage. (Maybe Rosencrantz?) |
Thanks Darren, I appreciate your comments, I like to write about what makes me feel alive. This one was inspired by a friend who is also a poet and a performer. |