by Wafaa Mar 3, 2013
category :
Life, society /
about society
Eyes crafted with the scars of loss, became |
by Saerelune
Your way of writing really interests me here. You don't seem to directly describe the image that's in your mind, rather tiptoe around it, trying to suggest it, which I think is a very effective method in straying from triteness. I think your opening lines already prove what I just said: |
by Maple Tree
Sonia- The deterioration of society is a topic that makes most people speechless... this poem speaks volumes... love this! |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow, this is impressive. i really think the message int his is very fitting right now with everything that is going on, also it is very deep because as much as people want to ignore these problems and feel they do not matter, they are huge in the world! You mention skinny figures, that in itself is such a huge and deep topic because the socitey and media have shaped young peoples mind to be this way therefor it creates a standard for them to meet, in turn this causes the mind and health problems. |