I am glad this isn't the last poem you have written.

I also hope you keep this and let your future wife read it.

It is very strong emotionally, you write straight as you feel and pull no punches.

The second half of this is really touching in places.

I have just re-read and this time the word 'rap' came to me. I can imagine this being rapped as part of a song or read aloud as slam poetry.

either way nice job.
With 275 visits I think you deserved at least one comment.

I really liked the poem, i keep re-reading it, its amazing and the words just flow beautifully together