Oh Saffie, this is beautiful and such a lovely dedication to this person... its always reassuring to know that you have that one someone that you can trust and feel safe with

In time I have learned that her blue eyes
truly define the person she is
because her heart is like the calmest ocean
who cares for every young fish
that swims beneath her waves

^^Love that...

Saffie, this is so beautiful.
I can really feel the love in this
This person earned your trust
And proved they are legit ,

Really lovely write

This really is lovely saffie. Eyes are so beautiful on each person and can show so much in such a simple thing. You start out simple yet strong. You fear a stranger and I love the vagueness again of this poem as you do not say who this person is. It leaves the reader asking stuff like. Are they related to you? Did you just meet them? Anything like that. Yes eyes are oceans of the calmest souls when we get lost in them. I love it when we can find trust in someone and be friends with them. This really is a lovely write because. You think so highly of this person and you can tell how much you care. In this poem you say this person healed your heart and has become so close to you. I love this dedication. 5/5