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MaryAnne, You tore me and left me dumbfounded...
I cannot comment, because there's nothing to say except WOOOOOOOOW!!

xx

Some very deep soul searching is going on in MaryAnne's head...

You will come out a stronger person, little sister, believe me *hugs*

Very well written, stunner you<3

5/5 Ingrid

My my my what have we here?

A poem with metaphors that break your heart.

Maryanne this was amazing!! Sometimes too many metaphors become overwhelming, i dont think they are necessary in every stanza, but here, its almost like your metaphors werent metaphors...they just totally made sense to me..they didnt sound like broken English, or crafty writing, it was as if they told the story and had me nodding my head like yup, I agree with this, yup, this makes sense. I know I'm babbling, but I hope you get what I mean. I havent really been captivated by metaphors like I have here in a really long time. I love it!!