Your life matters

by marina14   Mar 7, 2013


I sit here and wonder what went wrong
Within myself I look deep inside and try and find the truth
But I get lost and I still don't see why where I went wrong but it was somewhere starting when I took the first slice to my arm and then it was clear to me as I looked at my scares seeing it from my past to reality as they stay there it hurts to see what causes me to do that .. pain goes a long way even when you really love the person don't take nothing for granted cherish and love it and if it hurts to much let it go and try and be happy have the courage to stay strong for yourself cause your Deserve to be happy for you and no body else

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  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    I actually love how inspiring and innocent this piece sounds to me! Like it's whispering right into my ear. The fact that your soul is wandering around trying to figure out what happen to things that was once mattered to you the most is what seems interesting to me.

    The feeling of not knowing what exactly is happening should be a great way for you to inspire people, just like the title does. But I really think you might want/need to considered writing using some certain marks in every line so the inspirational message you're hoping to reach readers will be easier to attained to some people.

    This piece is already inspiring enough and I just think that if you input comma, period or maybe exclamation marks in your writing will makes it seems like it is beautifully written, just like being honest to ourselves.

    Hoping to read more from you in the future. Keep writing! Have a lovely day ahead, girl! :)

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