Great poem Hayley, i really liked it alot and gave you a 5! Im going to read the rest of your stuff right now! hayley xx

thanx guys.. i wrote this poem at school one day

that was..like all the your poems i read so far...was great!! all *5*!! keep it up!! :)

one word.... BRILLIANT!!! ok maybe 2 FANTASTIC!!! oh what the heck it was absolutley fabulous!!!! lol nice job!

great poem u got alot of talent and by the looks of it ur not letting it go to waste excellent poem like all of them i loved it
Dee